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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Is this senetence grammatically correct?

Dear member ,
Welcome to X Web Site, We are glad that you have registered here and we hope you enjoy your time here. X Team and Members Want you to introduce yourself here(link) to know each other better in community and makes relations closer.

Thanks and best regard.
X Team

shouldn't it be as following

Dear member ,
Welcome to X Web Site, We are glad that you have registered here(no need to use here twice) and we hope you enjoy your time here. X Team and Members Want you to introduce yourself here(link)to get to know each other better in community and make relations closer.

Thanks and best regards.
X Team

Thank you teachers
  

Top answer

Hi The latter seems ok to me. Just I think you don't need to write the verbs and nouns in capital letters. Regards Nata

  • Hi The latter seems ok to me.
  • Just I think you don't need to write the verbs and nouns in capital letters.
  • Regards Nata
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Hi

The latter seems ok to me. Just I think you don't need to write the verbs and nouns in capital letters.

Regards

Nata

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