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Creativeguru Posted 13 years ago
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Is this self explanatory? Please help

The moment you step into Mane Palms(residency project), you feel the rich softness of sand brushed everywhere(flooring & building exteriors) dotted with palm trees. Enjoy a walk onto the pathway that runs beside the river.
  

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The phrase "sand brushed everywhere" does not work.
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What you advise...should I delete it?

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What do you mean for it to say?
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We want to say the floor titles are of sand colour hence it gives you a feel as you are walking on the sand and the whole area is dotted with palm tress

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...designed to give you the sense of walking outdoors along the sand, complete with live palm trees.

Maybe something like that?
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The moment you step into Mane Palms(residency project), you feel the rich softness spread across acres of land dotted with palm trees

How is this sentence?
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