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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Electrical shop personnel will perform these inspections frequently as required to maintain six inspections cycles on record.
  

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Hi, Electrical shop personnel will perform these inspections frequently as required to maintain six inspections cycles on record. I suggest this. Electrical-shop personnel will perform these inspections as frequently as required to maintain six inspections cycles on record.

— Clive

  • Hi, Electrical shop personnel will perform these inspections frequently as required to maintain six inspections cycles on record.
  • I suggest this.
  • Electrical-shop personnel will perform these inspections as frequently as required to maintain six inspections cycles on record.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Electrical shop personnel will perform these inspections frequently as required to maintain six inspections cycles on record.

I suggest this.

Electrical-shop personnel will perform these inspections as frequently as required to maintain six inspections cycles on record.



Clive
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I'd drop the "s" from "inspection(s) cycles."

I'm having trouble imagining a scenario where the "record" periodically phases out. How does this work?
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Lets try this; To maintain six inspection cycles on record, electrical-shop personal will perform these inspections as and when required.
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