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June1989 Posted 16 years ago
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I am sorry but I can not commit to work full-time. My current manager will need a replacement for me. also,my parents are coming next month. I'll need to do some traveling with them. I do not want to keep you hanging so I thought of letting you know in advance. Thanks
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There is nothing inherently wrong with what you wrote. I might write it like this: "I'm sorry but I can't commit to working full-time. My current manager will need a replacement for me.
- There is nothing inherently wrong with what you wrote.
- I might write it like this: "I'm sorry but I can't commit to working full-time.
- My current manager will need a replacement for me.
- My parents are coming in next monght and I will need to do some traavelling with them.
- I don't want to keep you hanging so I thought I would let you know in advance.
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There is nothing inherently wrong with what you wrote.
I might write it like this:
"I'm sorry but I can't commit to working full-time. My current manager will need a replacement for me. My parents are coming in next monght and I will need to do some traavelling with them. I don't want to keep you hanging so I thought I would let you know in advance. Thank you."
I might write it like this:
"I'm sorry but I can't commit to working full-time. My current manager will need a replacement for me. My parents are coming in next monght and I will need to do some traavelling with them. I don't want to keep you hanging so I thought I would let you know in advance. Thank you."
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