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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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In Daltigoth, Relfas and ten of his subordinate warlords were executed for their failure in the battle at the Solvin Hills by the order of Ackal V.
  

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In Daltigoth, Relfas and ten of his subordinate warlords were executed by the order of Ackal V for their failure in the battle at the Solvin Hills.

— Mister Micawber

  • In Daltigoth, Relfas and ten of his subordinate warlords were executed by the order of Ackal V for their failure in the battle at the Solvin Hills.
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In Daltigoth, Relfas and ten of his subordinate warlords were executed by the order of Ackal V for their failure in the battle at the Solvin Hills.
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