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Zany scarf 684 Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Is this proper English grammar in past tense

Your hair thick with ringlets which bounced with every little step you took.

  

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zany scarf 684 Your hair thick with ringlets which bounced with every little step you took. There is no main verb. It's not a good sentence.

  • zany scarf 684 Your hair thick with ringlets which bounced with every little step you took.
  • There is no main verb.
  • It's not a good sentence.
  • You'll need to add at least 'was': Your hair was thick with ringlets which bounced with every little step you took.
  • Now it's a good sentence in the past tense.
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zany scarf 684 Your hair thick with ringlets which bounced with every little step you took.

There is no main verb. It's not a good sentence. You'll need to add at least 'was':

Your hair was thick with ringlets which bounced with every little step you took. 

Now it's a good sentence in the past tense.

CJ

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