Your hair thick with ringlets which bounced with every little step you took.
zany scarf 684 Your hair thick with ringlets which bounced with every little step you took. There is no main verb. It's not a good sentence.
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zany scarf 684 Your hair thick with ringlets which bounced with every little step you took.
There is no main verb. It's not a good sentence. You'll need to add at least 'was':
Your hair was thick with ringlets which bounced with every little step you took.
Now it's a good sentence in the past tense.
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