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In 362 AC, Porthios and the Silvanesti queen Alhana Starbreeze married to join their two elven kingdoms, but little did either of them know that this would grow from a political marriage to true love. Many nobles from both nations thought that the other was trying to take over their realm, and so they plotted to overthrow the two rulers. That time eventually came in 382 AC, when Porthios led his forces against the last of the green dragons and their humanoid allies in a final campaign to cleanse all of Silvanesti.