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Alhana sent Samar to find Silvanoshei, while she and her warriors remained in Silvanesti to battle the Dark Knights. Shortly thereafter, Alhana met with Gilthas and the Qualinesti elves who had escaped from the doomed Qualinost, and the two leaders decided to join forces. A few weeks later, Samar returned to Silvanesti to inform Alhana that he had met with the Solamnic Knight Gerard uth Mondar and that her son was a prisoner of the Dark Knights in Sanction.