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When Drizzt and his companions emerged from the sewers, the drow warrior summoned Guenhwyvar and they then confronted Alegni on Neverwinter’s prominent bridge. However, Alegni had been expecting them since he had learned of their presence from Invidoo. After a vicious fight, the three companions finally managed to defeat Alegni and take possession of Charon’s Claw, and when the tiefling tried to escape through a shadow gate, he was tackled by Guenhwyvar. They both traveled through the gate to the Shadowfell, where Guenhwyvar was magically imprisoned by Draygo Quick, a powerful warlock and a Netherese lord.