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When Catti-brie, Drizzt, and the others were then reunited, they decided to leave Gauntlgrym, except for Entreri, who chose to remain in the complex. Entreri had loved Dahlia and wanted to gain some vengeance on the drow for transforming her into a servant of the Spider Queen. Before Drizzt and his companions departed from Gauntlgrym, Bruenor placed his axe, shield, and helmet in the ancient dwarven homeland’s main forge and received a gift from the dwarf gods, who infused his weapons with powerful magic. After the group left Gauntlgrym and reached the surface, Afafrenfere and Ambergris decided to journey to Damara, while Drizzt and the others began to make their way toward Port Llast and Longsaddle.