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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Captured nomads revealed that they had attempted to break into the blockhouse, but had fled when they were magical attacked by the building’s occupant. A group of kender infiltrated the blockhouse on Kiya’s orders and quickly captured its occupant, Helbin. The mage explained to Kiya that although he was their ally, he could only reveal his purpose in the Eastern Hundred to Tol himself. To prevent any treachery by the mage, Kiya had Helbin placed under guard until Tol could make the decision on what was to be done with him. Also at that time, news spread throughout Daltigoth that the bakali force was across the Dalti River. The prices of food, cloth, and other commodities tripled, causing riots by the common people to spread throughout the capital. The rioters quickly overwhelmed the city guards and then broke into and looted the capital’s warehouses.
  
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