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Once in its cave, XimXim discovered that Tol and his companions had infiltrated its home, and a brutal fight immediately commenced. Tol defeated XimXim with the help of Mandes’s magic, but during the battle, the monster severed the wizard’s left arm.The victorious Ergothians journeyed to Hylo City, where they discovered that the kender capital was in celebration due to the death of XimXim, who had terrorized the kender for many years. Tol met with Casberry, the Queen of Hylo, and learned that the Tarsan army under the command of Tylocost had won a decisive victory. Urakan’s army had attempted to cross Three Rose Creek, a shallow stream northeast of Old Port, two days before. However, when half of the force was across, the Tarsans attacked.
  

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Once in its cave, XimXim discovered that Tol and his companions had infiltrated its home, and a brutal fight commenced. The victorious Ergothians journeyed to Hylo City, where they discovered that the kender capital celebrating the death of XimXim, who had terrorized the kender for years. Tol met with Casberry, the Queen of Hylo, and learned that the Tarsan army under Tylocost had won a decisive victory.

  • Once in its cave, XimXim discovered that Tol and his companions had infiltrated its home, and a brutal fight commenced.
  • The victorious Ergothians journeyed to Hylo City, where they discovered that the kender capital celebrating the death of XimXim, who had terrorized the kender for years.
  • Tol met with Casberry, the Queen of Hylo, and learned that the Tarsan army under Tylocost had won a decisive victory.
  • Urakan’s army had attempted to cross Three Rose Creek, a shallow stream northeast of Old Port, two days before.
  • However, when half of the force was across, the Tarsans attacked.
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Once in its cave, XimXim discovered that Tol and his companions had infiltrated its home, and a brutal fight commenced. Tol defeated XimXim with the help of Mandes’s magic, but during the battle, the monster severed the wizard’s left arm.The victorious Ergothians journeyed to Hylo City, where they discovered that the kender capital celebrating the death of XimXim, who had terrorized the kender

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