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As the comrades fought their way through the battling forces towards the orc leaders, Drizzt forced Bruenor to choose the destiny of the land, which resulted in Bruenor leaping atop the back of the weakened Obould to launch himself at Grguch. While his other companions continued to battle the orc soldiers, Drizzt engaged Hakuun and ultimately slew the shaman as well as the shape-shifting Jack. Bruenor fought a vicious duel against Grguch, which ended with the orc chieftain being disemboweled and decapitated.
  

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As the comrades fought their way through the battling forces towards the orc leaders, Drizzt forced Bruenor to choose the destiny of the land, and Bruenor leaped atop the weakened Obould to launch himself at Grguch. While his other companions continued to battle the orc soldiers, Drizzt engaged Hakuun and ultimately slew the shaman as well as the shape-shifting Jack. Bruenor fought a vicious duel against Grguch, which ended with the orc chieftain disemboweled and decapitated.

  • As the comrades fought their way through the battling forces towards the orc leaders, Drizzt forced Bruenor to choose the destiny of the land, and Bruenor leaped atop the weakened Obould to launch himself at Grguch.
  • While his other companions continued to battle the orc soldiers, Drizzt engaged Hakuun and ultimately slew the shaman as well as the shape-shifting Jack.
  • Bruenor fought a vicious duel against Grguch, which ended with the orc chieftain disemboweled and decapitated.
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As the comrades fought their way through the battling forces towards the orc leaders, Drizzt forced Bruenor to choose the destiny of the land, and Bruenor leaped atop the weakened Obould to launch himself at Grguch. While his other companions continued to battle the orc soldiers, Drizzt engaged Hakuun and ultimately slew the shaman as well as the shape-shifting Jack. Bruenor fough

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