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At that time, Tol and Darpo noticed Tylocost in the midst of the Tarsan center, and quickly called together a dozen men and prepared to penetrate deep into the enemy formation. Once Tol spotted Tylocost, he and his small band of warriors ran through the wounded and dying men and directly approached the mercenary general. A group of nearby Tarsans rushed to their leader’s rescue, but the Ergothians fought them off while Tol, Darpo, and two other soldiers captured Tylocost. Tol promised to spare Tylocost’s men if he yielded, and the elf then ordered his bugler to signal for the Tarsan army to surrender to the Ergothians. Due to Tol’s daring strategy and actions during the battle, the major defeat of Tylocost and his army had finally been achieved.