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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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After a few adventurous days of travel through the hill country, the small band arrived at the coast along the Gulf of Ergoth. There, the Ergothians hired a ship knwn as the Blue Gull to carry them to the imperial port of Thorngoth. However, only a day into the journey, the ship was attacked and captured by pirate ships from the Blood Fleet. The Blood Fleet consisted of over two hundred ships of varying sizes that all served the self-styled King of the Sea, Xanka. The pirate lord ordered for Tol and his companions to be taken aboard his flagship, Thunderer, and then ordered the destruction of the captured ship.
  

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After a few adventurous days of travel through the hill country, the small band arrived at the coast of the Gulf of Ergoth. There, the Ergothians hired a ship known as the Blue Gull to carry them to the imperial port of Thorngoth. The first day, the ship was captured by pirates from the Blood Fleet.

— Mister Micawber

  • After a few adventurous days of travel through the hill country, the small band arrived at the coast of the Gulf of Ergoth.
  • There, the Ergothians hired a ship known as the Blue Gull to carry them to the imperial port of Thorngoth.
  • The first day, the ship was captured by pirates from the Blood Fleet.
  • The Blood Fleet consisted of over two hundred ships serving the self-styled King of the Sea, Xanka.
  • The pirate lord ordered Tol and his companions to be taken aboard his flagship, Thunderer, ordering the destruction of the captured ship.
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After a few adventurous days of travel through the hill country, the small band arrived at the coast of the Gulf of Ergoth. There, the Ergothians hired a ship known as the Blue Gull to carry them to the imperial port of Thorngoth. The first day, the ship was captured by pirates from the Blood Fleet. The Blood Fleet consisted of over two hundred ships serving the self-styled King of the Sea, Xan
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