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Tol led his remaining two hundred sixty men to Old Port, where they captured a few Tarsan soldiers who revealed valuable information. The Ergothians learned that only a few score Tarsan soldiers were actually quartered in the town and that the main army was south of Three Rose Creek, outside of Old Port, since Tylocost was preparing to strike south and destroy Urakan’s army once and for all. The enemy force facing the Ergothians was twelve thousand strong, and consisted of an equal number of infantry and cavalry units. All the rest of Tylocost’s fifty thousand warriors had been lost in the past two years of war to battle, sickness, and XimXim. Tol’s prisoners also revealed that a reinforcement force of twenty thousand soldiers was expected to arrive before autumn.
  

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Tol led his remaining three hundred men to Old Port, where they captured several Tarsan soldiers with valuable information. The Ergothians learned that only a few score Tarsan soldiers were actually quartered in the town and that the main army was south of Three Rose Creek, outside of Old Port, since Tylocost was preparing to strike south and destroy Urakan’s army once and for all. The enemy force facing the Ergothians was twelve thousand strong, and consisted of an equal number of infantry and cavalry units.

  • Tol led his remaining three hundred men to Old Port, where they captured several Tarsan soldiers with valuable information.
  • The Ergothians learned that only a few score Tarsan soldiers were actually quartered in the town and that the main army was south of Three Rose Creek, outside of Old Port, since Tylocost was preparing to strike south and destroy Urakan’s army once and for all.
  • The enemy force facing the Ergothians was twelve thousand strong, and consisted of an equal number of infantry and cavalry units.
  • All the rest of Tylocost’s fifty thousand warriors had been lost to wounds, sickness, and XimXimin in the past two years of war .
  • Tol’s prisoners also revealed that a reinforcement of twenty thousand soldiers was expected to arrive before autumn.
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Tol led his remaining three hundred men to Old Port, where they captured several Tarsan soldiers with valuable information. The Ergothians learned that only a few score Tarsan soldiers were actually quartered in the town and that the main army was south of Three Rose Creek, outside of Old Port, since Tylocost was preparing to strike south and destroy Urakan’s army once and for all. The enemy fo

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