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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Takhisis sent Mina to wash up on the shores of the island of Schallsea, amusing herself that the child who would conquer the world for her would be raised by a mortal follower of Mishakal. The story that circulated of Mina’s arrival on Schallsea was that all records and family members were thought to have been lost in a shipwreck, which caused the girl to wash up on the shores of the island in 413 AC at the age of nine. A local fisherman found her lying on the beach of Schallsea and ran to get help. When a group of people arrived to aid her, Mina awakened briefly before she was taken to the orphans’ home at the Citadel of Light. It was the mystic Goldmoon, one of the Heroes of the Lance, who named the mysterious girl "Mina", and took her in as her adopted daughter.
  

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In 413 AC, Takhisis washed Mina up at the age of nine on the shores of the island of Schallsea, amused that the child who would conquer the world for her would be raised by a mortal follower of Mishakal. The story that circulated concerning Mina’s arrival was that all her family and family records had been lost in the wreck . A local fisherman found her lying on the beach and ran for help.

— Mister Micawber

  • In 413 AC, Takhisis washed Mina up at the age of nine on the shores of the island of Schallsea, amused that the child who would conquer the world for her would be raised by a mortal follower of Mishakal.
  • The story that circulated concerning Mina’s arrival was that all her family and family records had been lost in the wreck .
  • A local fisherman found her lying on the beach and ran for help.
  • Mina awakened briefly before she was taken to the orphans’ home at the Citadel of Light.
  • It was the mystic Goldmoon, one of the Heroes of the Lance, who named the mystery girl "Mina " and adopted her.
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In 413 AC, Takhisis washed Mina up at the age of nine on the shores of the island of Schallsea, amused that the child who would conquer the world for her would be raised by a mortal follower of Mishakal. The story that circulated concerning Mina’s arrival was that all her family and family records had been lost in the wreck. A local fisherman found her lying o
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