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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this passage all worded and structured correctly as an intro?

Almost two hundred years after the empire’s founding, one man rose from lowborn beginnings to consort with rulers and become the fiercest general in Ergoth. This extraordinary man was named Tol; he was born the son of peasants in a remote part of the Eastern Hundred province in 2432 PC, and grew up tending the fields of his family’s farm.
  

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cboutin3 Is this passage all worded and structured correctly as an intro? Yes.

  • cboutin3 Is this passage all worded and structured correctly as an intro?
  • Yes.
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cboutin3 Is this passage all worded and structured correctly as an intro?
Yes.

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