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Manohonor Posted 22 years ago
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IS THIS PASSAGE ALL RIGHT?
Can ever one moment completely change your life? You would obviuosly say – yes, it can. But I wish the moment I’ve had in my life had really changed it. But it hasn’t. It’s smashed my life to pieces – to tiny pieces. And this is now impossible to collect them together. Strange the way you slowly realize that everything you tried to achieve is nothing. And frightening to apprehend that your life, in that case, is nothing too. It’s shocking and immediate – like someone had thrust a dagger into your heart and left him in the wound. And your wound festers as time goes by. My wound was words and then their proof.
IS THIS PASSAGE RIGHT GRAMMATICALLY. I mean CAN EVER ONE MOMENT..., why not CAN ONE MOMENT EVER CHANGE... and so on. You got me right?
IS THIS PASSAGE RIGHT GRAMMATICALLY. I mean CAN EVER ONE MOMENT..., why not CAN ONE MOMENT EVER CHANGE... and so on. You got me right?
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THis is how I would put it: "Can one moment ever change your life completely? Obviously, you'd say it can, but I wish the moment I experienced really did change it. Yet it didn't; it has smashed my life to tiny pieces impossible to collect.
- THis is how I would put it: "Can one moment ever change your life completely?
- Obviously, you'd say it can, but I wish the moment I experienced really did change it.
- Yet it didn't; it has smashed my life to tiny pieces impossible to collect.
- " (I'm taking a guess at what you meant in the next sentence because I'm not sure) "Being frightened to come to terms with that / accept that reduces your life to insignificance too.
- It's a shocking and immediate reaslisation - like a dagger thrust into your heart and left in the wound which festers as time goes by.
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THis is how I would put it:
"Can one moment ever change your life completely? Obviously, you'd say it can, but I wish the moment I experienced really did change it. Yet it didn't; it has smashed my life to tiny pieces impossible to collect. The way you slowly realise the insignificance of everything you tried to achieve is strange." (I'm taking a guess at what you meant in the next sent
"Can one moment ever change your life completely? Obviously, you'd say it can, but I wish the moment I experienced really did change it. Yet it didn't; it has smashed my life to tiny pieces impossible to collect. The way you slowly realise the insignificance of everything you tried to achieve is strange." (I'm taking a guess at what you meant in the next sent
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