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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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FYI- Drizzt is the drow and Entreri is the assassin. Drizzt looked at Barrabus and was stunned to recognize the face of Entreri, whom he had thought was long dead. Drizzt did not believe that Barrabus was actually Entreri, but was soon convinced when the assassin revealed intimate knowledge of the drow that only he would have known. Drizzt proposed a truce between the three and suggested that they work together to kill Sylora; however, he and Dahlia were not certain that they could trust Entreri. The assassin then explained to Drizzt that he had grown bored of him long ago and no longer had a vendetta against him. To Dahlia, Entreri clarified that his mission to assassinate or capture her was nothing personal, and that killing Sylora would achieve both of their goals.
  

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Drizzt looked at Barrabus and was stunned to recognize the face of Entreri, whom he had t hought long dead. He was soon convinced that Barrabus was actually Entreri when the assassin revealed intimate knowledge of the drow that only he would have known. Drizzt proposed a truce among the three, suggesting that they work together to kill Sylora; however, he and Dahlia were not certain that they could trust Entreri.

— Mister Micawber

  • Drizzt looked at Barrabus and was stunned to recognize the face of Entreri, whom he had t hought long dead.
  • He was soon convinced that Barrabus was actually Entreri when the assassin revealed intimate knowledge of the drow that only he would have known.
  • Drizzt proposed a truce among the three, suggesting that they work together to kill Sylora; however, he and Dahlia were not certain that they could trust Entreri.
  • The assassin then explained that he had grown bored with him long ago and no longer held a vendetta.
  • Entreri explained that his mission to assassinate or capture Dahlia was nothing personal, and that killing Sylora would achieve both of their goals.
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Drizzt looked at Barrabus and was stunned to recognize the face of Entreri, whom he had thought long dead. He was soon convinced that Barrabus was actually Entreri when the assassin revealed intimate knowledge of the drow that only he would have known. Drizzt proposed a truce among the three, suggesting that they work together to kill Sylora; however, he and D
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