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In Daltigoth, Relfas and ten of his subordinate warlords were executed by the order of Ackal V for their failure in the battle at the Solvin Hills. Also at that time, the emperor had Oropash executed for his failure in not preventing the defeats of the empire’s armies by the bakali force. Helbin, who had disappeared from the capital prior to Oropash’s execution, was proclaimed to be a traitor. The White-Robed wizard Winath was then made the leader of the imperial mages, and when she returned to the Tower of Sorcery, she discovered that Oropash’s last spell had been an image of the future sent to Tol. Knowing that this information could result in the deaths of all the mages in Daltigoth, Winath decided to keep it a secret from everyone.
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In Daltigoth, Relfas and ten underlords were executed by Ackal V for their failure in the battle at the Solvin Hills. The emperor also had Oropash executed for failing to prevent the defeats of the empire’s armies by the bakali force. Helbin, who had disappeared from the capital prior to Oropash’s execution, was proclaimed a traitor.
- In Daltigoth, Relfas and ten underlords were executed by Ackal V for their failure in the battle at the Solvin Hills.
- The emperor also had Oropash executed for failing to prevent the defeats of the empire’s armies by the bakali force.
- Helbin, who had disappeared from the capital prior to Oropash’s execution, was proclaimed a traitor.
- The White-Robed wizard Winath was madeleader of the imperial mages.
- When she returned to the Tower of Sorcery, she discovered that Oropash’s last spell had been an image of the future sent to Tol.
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In Daltigoth, Relfas and ten underlords were executed by Ackal V for their failure in the battle at the Solvin Hills. The emperor also had Oropash executed for failing to prevent the defeats of the empire’s armies by the bakali force. Helbin, who had disappeared from the capital prior to Oropash’s execution, was proclaimed a traitor. The White-Robed wizard Winath was madeleader of the imperial
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