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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Soon thereafter, the group encountered a small dwarven caravan that being attacked by a force of bandits. Tol led his companions in a charge against the brigands, and they easily scared away the unskilled force of bandits. The dwarves explained to the Ergothians that they were a mining expedition from the city of Thoradin that had found rich diggings in the Harrow Sky Mountains. As a reward for the Ergothians’ bravery, the dwarves presented Tol with one of their newly forged sample creations, a steel saber called "Number Six".Following another day of travel, Tol and the group descended from the mountain range and arrived in the Harrow Sky hill country.
  

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Soon thereafter, the group encountered a small dwarven caravan under attack by a gang of bandits. Tol charged the brigands, and they easily drove off the unskilled fighters. The dwarves explained that they were a mining expedition from the city of Thoradin and had found rich diggings in the Harrow Sky Mountains.

  • Soon thereafter, the group encountered a small dwarven caravan under attack by a gang of bandits.
  • Tol charged the brigands, and they easily drove off the unskilled fighters.
  • The dwarves explained that they were a mining expedition from the city of Thoradin and had found rich diggings in the Harrow Sky Mountains.
  • As a reward for the Ergothians’ valour, the dwarves presented Tol with one of their newly forged prototypes, a steel saber called "Number Six".
  • After another day of travel, Tol's group descended from the mountains and arrived in Harrow Sky hill country.
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Soon thereafter, the group encountered a small dwarven caravan under attack by a gang of bandits. Tol charged the brigands, and they easily drove off the unskilled fighters. The dwarves explained that they were a mining expedition from the city of Thoradin and had found rich diggings in the Harrow Sky Mountains. As a reward for the Ergothians’ valour, the dwarves presented Tol with one of their

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