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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Tol was forced to accept the two women since they would serve as honorary hostages for the Dom-shu’s good behavior, but they became like older, protective sisters to him. As a result of his exploits in the war, Tol was also given the choice of an assignment in any part of Ergoth and to any horde in the empire’s service. To the surprise of everyone, Tol chose to become the commander of the Juramona foot soldiers, the men who had fought so valiantly alongside him in the Great Green.Two years later, Pakin III ordered that all of his high-ranking warlords and nobles report to Daltigoth to celebrate the founding of the Tower of Sorcery.
  

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Tol was forced to accept the two women, since they would serve as honorary hostages for the Dom-shu’s good behavior, but they became older, protective sisters. For his exploits in the war, Tol was also offered an assignment in any part of Ergoth and to any horde in the empire. Two years later, Pakin III ordered that all of his high-ranking warlords and nobles report to Daltigoth to celebrate the founding of the Tower of Sorcery.

  • Tol was forced to accept the two women, since they would serve as honorary hostages for the Dom-shu’s good behavior, but they became older, protective sisters.
  • For his exploits in the war, Tol was also offered an assignment in any part of Ergoth and to any horde in the empire.
  • Two years later, Pakin III ordered that all of his high-ranking warlords and nobles report to Daltigoth to celebrate the founding of the Tower of Sorcery.
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Tol was forced to accept the two women, since they would serve as honorary hostages for the Dom-shu’s good behavior, but they became older, protective sisters. For his exploits in the war, Tol was also offered an assignment in any part of Ergoth and to any horde in the empire. To everyone's surprise, Tol chose to be commander of the Juramona foot soldiers, who had fought so valiantly alongside

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