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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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As Marshal of the Eastern Hundred, Enkian was ordered to march to Daltigoth, along with Tol, who had been specifically requested by Amaltar himself. For the last two years, Tol and his foot soldiers had trained hard, learning by trial and error the best methods of battling mounted opponents until they had become a skilled and unique fighting force. The delegation from Juramona consisted of two hundred horsemen, along with luggage wagons that would be protected by Tol and one hundred of his foot soldiers.
  

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As Marshal of the Eastern Hundred, Enkian was ordered to march to Daltigoth, along with Tol, who had been specifically requested by Amaltar himself. For the last two years, Tol and his foot soldiers had trained hard in the best methods of battling mounted opponents, and they had become a skilled and unique fighting force. The delegation from Juramona consisted of two hundred horsemen, along with luggage wagons that would be protected by Tol and one hundred of his foot soldiers.

  • As Marshal of the Eastern Hundred, Enkian was ordered to march to Daltigoth, along with Tol, who had been specifically requested by Amaltar himself.
  • For the last two years, Tol and his foot soldiers had trained hard in the best methods of battling mounted opponents, and they had become a skilled and unique fighting force.
  • The delegation from Juramona consisted of two hundred horsemen, along with luggage wagons that would be protected by Tol and one hundred of his foot soldiers.
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As Marshal of the Eastern Hundred, Enkian was ordered to march to Daltigoth, along with Tol, who had been specifically requested by Amaltar himself. For the last two years, Tol and his foot soldiers had trained hard in the best methods of battling mounted opponents, and they had become a skilled and unique fighting force. The delegation from Juramona consisted of two hundred horsemen, along wit

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