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Although the Netherese expedition had continued their search for Xinlenal Enclave in Neverwinter Wood after the cataclysm, Alegni was removed as its leader due to his failure in preventing the Thayans from executing their plan. However, with the forces of Thay gaining a clear advantage in the war for control of the region, the tiefling was once again granted command. Alegni immediately recalled Barrabus from his life of relative luxury in Calimport to the far south, and ordered the assassin to hunt the Ashmadai in Neverwinter Wood, a task that the warrior was exceptionally successful at completing.
  

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Although the Netherese expedition had continued their search for Xinlenal Enclave in Neverwinter Wood after the cataclysm, Alegni was removed from leadership for his failure to prevent the Thayans' plan . However, with the forces of Thay gaining a clear advantage in the war over the region, the tiefling was once again granted command. Alegni immediately recalled Barrabus from his life of luxury in Calimport to the far sou th a nd ordered the assassin to hunt the Ashmadai in Neverwinter Wood, a task that the warrior completed quite successfully.

  • Although the Netherese expedition had continued their search for Xinlenal Enclave in Neverwinter Wood after the cataclysm, Alegni was removed from leadership for his failure to prevent the Thayans' plan .
  • However, with the forces of Thay gaining a clear advantage in the war over the region, the tiefling was once again granted command.
  • Alegni immediately recalled Barrabus from his life of luxury in Calimport to the far sou th a nd ordered the assassin to hunt the Ashmadai in Neverwinter Wood, a task that the warrior completed quite successfully.
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Although the Netherese expedition had continued their search for Xinlenal Enclave in Neverwinter Wood after the cataclysm, Alegni was removed from leadership for his failure to prevent the Thayans' plan. However, with the forces of Thay gaining a clear advantage in the war over the region, the tiefling was once again granted command. Alegni immediately recalled Barra

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