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However, Drizzt and his companions shared doubts about this city actually being Gauntlgrym upon seeing the buildings, which looked like ones that would be found above ground and not under. After a vicious battle against two monsters from the Plane of Shadow, the group entered a massive building and found something extraordinary: statues and tapestries of orcs and dwarves living together side by side in peace. A frustrated Bruenor and his companions gathered up as many scrolls from the building as they could and took them back to Mithral Hall to Nanfoodle, the gnome alchemist and illusionist.
  

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However, upon seeing the city, whose buildings looked like ones found above ground and not under it, Drizzt and his companions doubted that it was actually Gauntlgrym. After a vicious battle against two monsters from the Plane of Shadow, the group entered a massive structure and found extraordinary statues and tapestries of orcs and dwarves dwelling together in peace. A frustrated Bruenor and his companions gathered as many scrolls as possible and carried them to Mithral Hall to Nanfoodle, the gnome alchemist and illusionist.

  • However, upon seeing the city, whose buildings looked like ones found above ground and not under it, Drizzt and his companions doubted that it was actually Gauntlgrym.
  • After a vicious battle against two monsters from the Plane of Shadow, the group entered a massive structure and found extraordinary statues and tapestries of orcs and dwarves dwelling together in peace.
  • A frustrated Bruenor and his companions gathered as many scrolls as possible and carried them to Mithral Hall to Nanfoodle, the gnome alchemist and illusionist.
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However, upon seeing the city, whose buildings looked like ones found above ground and not under it, Drizzt and his companions doubted that it was actually Gauntlgrym. After a vicious battle against two monsters from the Plane of Shadow, the group entered a massive structure and found extraordinary statues and tapestries of orcs and dwarves dwelling

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