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Hojan watched from a distance as the departing enemy was joined by even more bakali, though these lizard-men were not warriors. After seeing this, Hojan realized that the bakali host was not only an army, but an entire nation on the moveAlso at that time, a nomad invasion was occurring, since the bakali army had displaced tens of thousands of them in their advance. Having lost everything to the lizard-men, the nomads formed an army and began trying to seize as much Ergothian territory as possible. The Eastern and Mountain Hundreds became full of their warbands, and even Hylo was threatened. Some isolated garrisons sent out small detachments, demi-hordes, to stop the nomads, but they were all swept aside.
  

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Hojan watched from a distance as the departing enemy was joined by ever more bakali, though these lizard-men were not warriors. Hojan realized that the bakali host was not only an army but an entire nation on the move. There was also at that time a nomad invasion, since the bakali army had displaced tens of thousands of them in their advance.

  • Hojan watched from a distance as the departing enemy was joined by ever more bakali, though these lizard-men were not warriors.
  • Hojan realized that the bakali host was not only an army but an entire nation on the move.
  • There was also at that time a nomad invasion, since the bakali army had displaced tens of thousands of them in their advance.
  • Having lost everything, these nomads formed an army and began seizing Ergothian territory.
  • The Eastern and Mountain Hundreds filled with their warbands, and even Hylo was threatened.
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Hojan watched from a distance as the departing enemy was joined by ever more bakali, though these lizard-men were not warriors. Hojan realized that the bakali host was not only an army but an entire nation on the move. There was also at that time a nomad invasion, since the bakali army had displaced tens of thousands of them in their advance. Having lost everything, these nomads formed an army

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