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Soon thereafter, Mandes met with Nazramin at the prince’s home and begged him for aid against both Tol and Elicarno. Nazramin refused to help the wizard and broke off his alliance since he realized that Mandes’s time in Daltigoth was now over. The day of the contest, Ackal IV, Valaran, and an imperial entourage assembled on the Field of Corij, a meadow north of the city, to witness the competition between Mandes and Elicarno. The emperor tasked the two competitors with destroying a wooden post buried into the ground, and the winner would be the individual who completed the assignment the fastest. Elicarno won the contest and Ackal IV then ordered the arrest of Mandes, but the wizard escaped capture.
  

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Soon thereafter, Mandes met Nazramin at the prince’s home and begged for aid against Tol and Elicarno. Nazramin refused to help the wizard and broke off their alliance, ralizing that Mandes’s time in Daltigoth was now over. The day of the contest, Ackal IV, Valaran, and an imperial entourage assembled on the Field of Corij, north of the city, to witness the competition between Mandes and Elicarno.

— Mister Micawber

  • Soon thereafter, Mandes met Nazramin at the prince’s home and begged for aid against Tol and Elicarno.
  • Nazramin refused to help the wizard and broke off their alliance, ralizing that Mandes’s time in Daltigoth was now over.
  • The day of the contest, Ackal IV, Valaran, and an imperial entourage assembled on the Field of Corij, north of the city, to witness the competition between Mandes and Elicarno.
  • The emperor tasked them with destroying a wooden post set into the ground: the winner would be the first one who did so.
  • Elicarno won, and Ackal IV then ordered Mandes's arrest, but the wizard escaped.
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Soon thereafter, Mandes met Nazramin at the prince’s home and begged for aid against Tol and Elicarno. Nazramin refused to help the wizard and broke off their alliance, ralizing that Mandes’s time in Daltigoth was now over. The day of the contest, Ackal IV, Valaran, and an imperial entourage assembled on the Field of Corij, north of the city, to witness the competition between Mandes and Elicar
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