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Tol still had received no messages from Valaran or Egrin, and the only word from Amaltar was that he appreciated Tol for keeping station throughout the winter months, but no praise for his autumn victories. When a private message finally did arrive, it came in the form of Sanksa. The Karad-shu man had left with Egrin for Daltigoth months earlier, and explained to Tol that upon their arrival in Caergoth, they had been ordered to the southern coast to secretly train six hordes to fight the Kharland pirates who had continually plundered the empire’s coast. Sanksa deserted the Ergothian coastal camp to travel to Hylo to inform Tol of the treachery that was done in the capital by Mandes. Although Tol was ordered to remain in Hylo with the army, he swore vengeance on Mandes and the others who had betrayed him.
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Tol had still received no messages from Valaran or Egrin, and the only word from Amaltar was that he appreciated Tol's maintaining the/his station throughout the winter months, but without praise for his autumn victories. When a private message finally arrived, it came in the form of Sanksa, the Karad-shu man who had left with Egrin for Daltigoth months earlier. He explained to Tol that upon their arrival in Caergoth, they had been ordered to the southern coast to train six hordes to fight the Kharland pirates who had been plundering the empire’s coast.
- Tol had still received no messages from Valaran or Egrin, and the only word from Amaltar was that he appreciated Tol's maintaining the/his station throughout the winter months, but without praise for his autumn victories.
- When a private message finally arrived, it came in the form of Sanksa, the Karad-shu man who had left with Egrin for Daltigoth months earlier.
- He explained to Tol that upon their arrival in Caergoth, they had been ordered to the southern coast to train six hordes to fight the Kharland pirates who had been plundering the empire’s coast.
- Sanksa deserted the Ergothian coastal camp to inform Tol of Mandes's treachery in the capital.
- Although Tol was ordered to remain in Hylo, he swore vengeance on Mandes and the others who had betrayed him.
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Tol had still received no messages from Valaran or Egrin, and the only word from Amaltar was that he appreciated Tol's maintaining the/his station throughout the winter months, but without praise for his autumn victories. When a private message finally arrived, it came in the form of Sanksa, the Karad-shu man who had left with Egrin for Daltigoth months earlier. He explained to Tol that upon th
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