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Spannuth Grane, a renegade mage and the commander of the northern Pakin forces, and his soldiers reached the farm and questioned Tol, and on his instructions they followed the trail of Odovar’s horse, who Tol had scared away earlier. When Odovar regained consciousness, he ordered Tol to assist him in the journey east to Juramona, where he could assemble his forces against the Pakin rebels. While traveling towards the town, the pair was discovered by a small group of Odovar’s soldiers who had survived the ambush and had been searching for their missing lord. While encamped that night, the Ergothians were attacked by a magical panther creature that had been sent by Grane to find and slay Odovar. However, the marshal killed the dark beast with the help of Egrin Raemel, the Warden of Juramona’s Household Guard.
  

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Spannuth Grane, a renegade mage and commander of the northern Pakin forces, and his soldiers reached the farm and questioned Tol, and on his instructions they followed the trail of Odovar’s horse, which Tol had frightened off earlier. When Odovar regained consciousness, he ordered Tol to assist him in the journey east to Juramona, where he could assemble his forces against the Pakin rebels. While traveling towards the town, the pair was discovered by a small group of Odovar’s soldiers, survivors of the ambush, who had been searching for their missing lord.

  • Spannuth Grane, a renegade mage and commander of the northern Pakin forces, and his soldiers reached the farm and questioned Tol, and on his instructions they followed the trail of Odovar’s horse, which Tol had frightened off earlier.
  • When Odovar regained consciousness, he ordered Tol to assist him in the journey east to Juramona, where he could assemble his forces against the Pakin rebels.
  • While traveling towards the town, the pair was discovered by a small group of Odovar’s soldiers, survivors of the ambush, who had been searching for their missing lord.
  • Encamped that night, the Ergothians were attacked by a magical panther that had been sent by Grane to slay Odovar.
  • The marshal killed the dark beast with the help of Egrin Raemel, the Warden of Juramona’s Household Guard.
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Spannuth Grane, a renegade mage and commander of the northern Pakin forces, and his soldiers reached the farm and questioned Tol, and on his instructions they followed the trail of Odovar’s horse, which Tol had frightened off earlier. When Odovar regained consciousness, he ordered Tol to assist him in the journey east to Juramona, where he could assemble his forces against the Pakin rebels. Whi

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