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Upon the group’s arrival in Juramona, Tol, Egrin, and the other members of the Household Guard made their way to the large log house that was the home of the Riders of the Great Horde who resided in the town. After a night of celebration with the Riders, Tol accompanied Egrin to the High House, Odovar’s residence, where the fate of Vakka was decided. Odovar ordered Egrin to kill the Pakin noble in a public execution that was held the next day in the town square. Tol was horrified at the brutality of Vakka’s beheading, and once the execution ended, he decided that he wanted to leave Juramona and return to his home. However, Egrin instead offered Tol the chance to become his shilder (shield-bearer) and promised to teach him the ways of the warrior.
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Upon their arrival in Juramona, Tol, Egrin, and the other members of the Household Guard made their way to the large log house that was the home of the Riders of the Great Horde. After a night of celebration with the Riders, Tol accompanied Egrin to the High House, Odovar’s residence, where the fate of Vakka was decided. Odovar ordered Egrin to publicly execute the Pakin noble the next day in the town square.
- Upon their arrival in Juramona, Tol, Egrin, and the other members of the Household Guard made their way to the large log house that was the home of the Riders of the Great Horde.
- After a night of celebration with the Riders, Tol accompanied Egrin to the High House, Odovar’s residence, where the fate of Vakka was decided.
- Odovar ordered Egrin to publicly execute the Pakin noble the next day in the town square.
- Tol was horrified at the brutality of Vakka’s beheading, and he decided to leave Juramona and return home.
- However, Egrin offered Tol the chance to become his shilder or shield-bearer and promised to teach him the ways of the warrior.
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Upon their arrival in Juramona, Tol, Egrin, and the other members of the Household Guard made their way to the large log house that was the home of the Riders of the Great Horde. After a night of celebration with the Riders, Tol accompanied Egrin to the High House, Odovar’s residence, where the fate of Vakka was decided. Odovar ordered Egrin to publicly execute the Pakin noble the next day in t
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