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With Odovar’s death, Enkian Tumult, the cool and calculating lord of the house of Mordirin, was chosen as the new Marshal of the Eastern Hundred. The empire’s leaders also decided that the forest campaign would be put on a temporary halt, since such a well-armed force faced the imperial hordes, a radically different strategy was required. The three hordes from Juramona were sent home, and only two months later a small delegation of Dom-shu led by Makaralonga’s two daughters, Miya and Kiya, arrived at the imperial town to make peace with the empire. The daughters offered themselves to Tol as his new wives and declared that peace would now be binding between the Dom-Shu and the Ergothians.