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Hanira explained to the stunned Ergothians that the Pakin princess had arrived in Tarsis twelve years ago, and when the syndic discovered this, she immediately had spies placed among Mellamy’s followers. The recent troubles in Ergoth had encouraged the new Pretender to leave Tarsis with a small entourage, and she had arrived in Caergoth only the day before. Hanira revealed the princess’s location in the city, which allowed Tol to prevent any future threat from the Pakins and also increased the syndic’s influence in the empire. The warlords wanted the immediate execution of the Pakin, but Tol disagreed and decided on another course. He ordered Tylocost, who was saddened over Zala’s death, to capture the princess alive and take her out of Caergoth.
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Hanira explained to the stunned Ergothians that the Pakin princess had arrived in Tarsis twelve years before, and when the syndic discovered this, she had immediately placed spies among Mellamy’s followers. The recent troubles in Ergoth had encouraged the new Pretender to leave Tarsis with a small entourage, arriving in Caergoth only the day before. Hanira revealed the princess’s location in the city, allowing Tol to prevent any future threat from the Pakins and increasing the syndic’s influence in the empire.
- Hanira explained to the stunned Ergothians that the Pakin princess had arrived in Tarsis twelve years before, and when the syndic discovered this, she had immediately placed spies among Mellamy’s followers.
- The recent troubles in Ergoth had encouraged the new Pretender to leave Tarsis with a small entourage, arriving in Caergoth only the day before.
- Hanira revealed the princess’s location in the city, allowing Tol to prevent any future threat from the Pakins and increasing the syndic’s influence in the empire.
- The warlords asked for the immediate execution of the Pakin, but Tol decided on another course: he ordered Tylocost, who was saddened over Zala’s death, to capture the princess alive and remove her from Caergoth.
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Hanira explained to the stunned Ergothians that the Pakin princess had arrived in Tarsis twelve years before, and when the syndic discovered this, she had immediately placed spies among Mellamy’s followers. The recent troubles in Ergoth had encouraged the new Pretender to leave Tarsis with a small entourage, arriving in Caergoth only the day before. Hanira revealed the princess’s location in th
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