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One night during his travels, Tol received a magical vision from Mandes informing him that if he did not return to Daltigoth then the wizard would murder all of those close to him. Knowing that the mage had to die regardless, Tol continued on his journey and hoped that the spirit of Felryn would protect his loved ones. When Tol received a vision the next night, he was shown a magical creature sent by Mandes break into Elicarno’s workshop in Daltigoth. Although the creature killed the engineer and many of his apprentices, it was unable to slay Miya, who was the wizard’s true target. Seeing the deaths of those innocent people, Tol became more determined than ever to slay Mandes.
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One night during his travels, Tol received a vision from Mandes revealing that if he did not return to Daltigoth, the wizard would murder everyone close to him. Knowing that the mage must die regardless, Tol continued on his journey, hoping that the spirit of Felryn would protect his loved ones. Another vision the next night showed him a magical creature sent by Mandes breaking into Elicarno’s workshop in Daltigoth.
- One night during his travels, Tol received a vision from Mandes revealing that if he did not return to Daltigoth, the wizard would murder everyone close to him.
- Knowing that the mage must die regardless, Tol continued on his journey, hoping that the spirit of Felryn would protect his loved ones.
- Another vision the next night showed him a magical creature sent by Mandes breaking into Elicarno’s workshop in Daltigoth.
- The creature killed the engineer and many of his apprentices, but it was unable to slay Miya, the wizard’s true target.
- Seeing the deaths of those innocent people, Tol was more determined than ever to slay Mandes.
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One night during his travels, Tol received a vision from Mandes revealing that if he did not return to Daltigoth, the wizard would murder everyone close to him. Knowing that the mage must die regardless, Tol continued on his journey, hoping that the spirit of Felryn would protect his loved ones. Another vision the next night showed him a magical creature sent by Mandes breaking into Elicarno’s
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