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Anovenax’s previous plans had not brought him the swift victory that he had expected against the imperial army since Ergothian priests had been employed by the empire to work a powerful and prolonged wind spell that held the Tarsan fleet at bay on the sea outside of the city. Twice the Tarsans had tried to destroy the clerics; first, in a night raid that had failed, and then with magic of their own. Their hired mages had called forth a flock of fire-ravens, living birds made of flame. Imperial spellcasters countered with torrential rain and the fire-ravens were extinguished before they could cause any serious damage. As a result, Anovenax and his army concentrated their main attack on the tents that housed the clerics.