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As the spectral warriors massacred the servants, guards, and other inhabitants of Griffonwatch Keep, Geran and his companions fought their way through the castle to find the harmach and the other Hulmasters. After rescuing his family from the attacking wraiths, Geran decided that their best option for escape would be the small postern gate on the side of the keep. Upon arriving at the gate, the group discovered Sergen and a small force of mercenaries waiting to ambush anybody who was trying to escape the slaughter within the castle. Geran, Hamil, and Sarth were able to defeat or drive off the armsmen, but Hamil was seriously injured during the fight, and Sergen escaped after being wounded by Geran.
  

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As the spectral warriors massacred the servants, guards, and other inhabitants of Griffonwatch Keep, Geran and his companions fought their way through the castle to find the harmach and the other Hulmasters. After rescuing his family from the wraiths , Geran decided that their best option would be to escape through the small postern gate on the side of the keep, but at the g ate th e group discovered Sergen and a small force of mercenaries waiting to ambush anyone attempting to escape the slaughter. Geran, Hamil, and Sarth defeated or drove off the armsmen, but Hamil was seriously injured during the fight, and Sergen escaped after being wounded by Geran.

— Mister Micawber

  • As the spectral warriors massacred the servants, guards, and other inhabitants of Griffonwatch Keep, Geran and his companions fought their way through the castle to find the harmach and the other Hulmasters.
  • After rescuing his family from the wraiths , Geran decided that their best option would be to escape through the small postern gate on the side of the keep, but at the g ate th e group discovered Sergen and a small force of mercenaries waiting to ambush anyone attempting to escape the slaughter.
  • Geran, Hamil, and Sarth defeated or drove off the armsmen, but Hamil was seriously injured during the fight, and Sergen escaped after being wounded by Geran.
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As the spectral warriors massacred the servants, guards, and other inhabitants of Griffonwatch Keep, Geran and his companions fought their way through the castle to find the harmach and the other Hulmasters. After rescuing his family from the wraiths, Geran decided that their best option would be to escape through the small postern gate on the side of the keep, but a
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