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While Dorn, Karasendrieth, and the other hunters would start the search by traveling to the Moonsea, Taegan volunteered to remain in Lyrabar in order to convince the ruling powers of Impiltur to move against the cult’s stronghold in the Gray Forest. After being forced to wait a few weeks, Taegan Nightwind was granted an audience with Queen Sambryl and the Council of Lords, an assembly of the monarch’s ministers that was composed entirely of paladins who served the gods of light.
  

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While Dorn, Karasendrieth, and the other hunters would start the search by traveling to the Moonsea, Taegan volunteered to remain in Lyrabar in order to convince the ruling powers of Impiltur to move against the cult’s stronghold in the Gray Forest. Forced to wait a few weeks, Taegan Nightwind was eventually granted an audience with Queen Sambryl and the Council of Lords, an assembly of the monarch’s ministers composed entirely of paladins serving the gods of light.

  • While Dorn, Karasendrieth, and the other hunters would start the search by traveling to the Moonsea, Taegan volunteered to remain in Lyrabar in order to convince the ruling powers of Impiltur to move against the cult’s stronghold in the Gray Forest.
  • Forced to wait a few weeks, Taegan Nightwind was eventually granted an audience with Queen Sambryl and the Council of Lords, an assembly of the monarch’s ministers composed entirely of paladins serving the gods of light.
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While Dorn, Karasendrieth, and the other hunters would start the search by traveling to the Moonsea, Taegan volunteered to remain in Lyrabar in order to convince the ruling powers of Impiltur to move against the cult’s stronghold in the Gray Forest. Forced to wait a few weeks, Taegan Nightwind was eventually granted an audience with Queen Sambryl and the Council of Lords, an assem

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