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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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With the last sizable fighting force in Tarsis vanquished, Regobart summoned the city to yield, and the princes and syndics signaled their willingness to parley.The meeting occurred that night, and the terms of the city-state’s surrender were negotiated between the Ergothian and Tarsan leaders. The following morning, Tarsis opened its gates and officially surrendered to the empire’s armies. That night, Tol was invited to attend a dinner at the home of Hanira, a syndic of Tarsis and the mistress of the guild of goldsmiths and jewelers. Tol decided to accept the invitation and entered Tarsis accompanied by only two of his soldiers. Following a dull and uneventful dinner with fifty Tarsan guests at the Golden House, Hanira’s luxurious home, Tol was asked to stay the night in the syndic’s company.
  

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With the last sizable fighting force in Tarsis vanquished, Regobart commanded the city to yield, and the princes and syndics signaled a parley. That night, the terms of surrender were negotiated between the Ergothian and Tarsan leaders. The following morning, Tarsis officially opened its gates to the empire’s armies, and that night, Tol was invited to a dinner at the home of Hanira, a syndic of Tarsis and the mistress of the guild of goldsmiths and jewelers.

  • With the last sizable fighting force in Tarsis vanquished, Regobart commanded the city to yield, and the princes and syndics signaled a parley.
  • That night, the terms of surrender were negotiated between the Ergothian and Tarsan leaders.
  • The following morning, Tarsis officially opened its gates to the empire’s armies, and that night, Tol was invited to a dinner at the home of Hanira, a syndic of Tarsis and the mistress of the guild of goldsmiths and jewelers.
  • Tol accepted the invitation and entered Tarsis with only two of his soldiers.
  • Following a dull and uneventful dinner with fifty Tarsan guests at the Golden House, Hanira’s luxurious home, Tol was asked to stay the night in the syndic’s company.
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With the last sizable fighting force in Tarsis vanquished, Regobart commanded the city to yield, and the princes and syndics signaled a parley. That night, the terms of surrender were negotiated between the Ergothian and Tarsan leaders. The following morning, Tarsis officially opened its gates to the empire’s armies, and that night, Tol was invited to a dinner at the home of Hanira, a syndic of

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