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He also prepared many documents describing the death of XimXim and his victory over Tylocost to be delivered to Amaltar. Tol entrusted this important task with Mandes, who had survived the severe wound that had been inflicted on him by XimXim. When Mandes arrived in Daltigoth, he quickly formed an alliance with Nazramin, and the two then altered the important information that was contained in the documents written by Tol for the Crown Prince. The pair gave all the credit for the defeat of XimXim to Mandes, and the acclaim for the victory over Tylocost to Urakan. Nazramin and Mandes also made it seem that all Tol wanted in life was to remain with the imperial army in Hylo until Tarsis was defeated. The two altered Tol’s letter to Valaran as well, making it seem like he no longer valued his relationship with her and wanted to remain away from Daltigoth.
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He also prepared for Amaltar many documents describing the death of XimXim and his victory over Tylocost. Tol entrusted this important task to Mandes, who had survived the severe wound XimXim had inflicted. When Mandes arrived in Daltigoth, he formed an alliance with Nazramin, and the two then altered the critical information contained in the documents.
- He also prepared for Amaltar many documents describing the death of XimXim and his victory over Tylocost.
- Tol entrusted this important task to Mandes, who had survived the severe wound XimXim had inflicted.
- When Mandes arrived in Daltigoth, he formed an alliance with Nazramin, and the two then altered the critical information contained in the documents.
- They assigned all the credit for XimXim's defeat to Mandes, and for the victory over Tylocost to Urakan.
- They also made it appear that Tol wished only to remain with the imperial army in Hylo until Tarsis was defeated.
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He also prepared for Amaltar many documents describing the death of XimXim and his victory over Tylocost. Tol entrusted this important task to Mandes, who had survived the severe wound XimXim had inflicted. When Mandes arrived in Daltigoth, he formed an alliance with Nazramin, and the two then altered the critical information contained in the documents. They assigned all the credit for XimXim's
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