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Kouroshh Posted 11 years ago
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Is this part of my statment of research written correcly
I would like to explain why I believe that my theoretical and practical background is a perfect match for this position. I became interested in chemistry since I went to high school. I was very curious to learn about medicines and their mechanism in our body. Thus, I decided to study chemistry and started my bachelor’s degree in chemistry in Poland. From the beginning, I discovered my passion for organic chemistry and analytical chemistry and I acquired a very good knowledge and experience of organic chemistry synthesis, purification and characterization techniques both in theory and practice.
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References to high school fantasies seldom impress the reader. Nor do they like more words than necessary. And nobody's 'perfect'.
- References to high school fantasies seldom impress the reader.
- Nor do they like more words than necessary.
- And nobody's 'perfect'.
- My theoretical and practical background is a good match for this position.
- I was interested in learning about medicines and their mechanisms in our body, so I pursued my bachelor’s degree in chemistry in Poland, where I discovered my passion for organic and analytic chemistry and acquired a solid understanding of organic chemistry synthesis, purification and characterization techniques in theory and practice.
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References to high school fantasies seldom impress the reader. Nor do they like more words than necessary. And nobody's 'perfect'.
My theoretical and practical background is a good match for this position. I was interested in learning about medicines and their mechanisms in our body, so I pursued my bachelor’s degree in chemistry in Poland, where I discovered my passion for organic and
My theoretical and practical background is a good match for this position. I was interested in learning about medicines and their mechanisms in our body, so I pursued my bachelor’s degree in chemistry in Poland, where I discovered my passion for organic and
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Do you think this text is written correctly regarding my key courses?
During my bachelor program I took an advanced organic chemistry course, and I gained great experience on organic synthesis of ligands, and standard techniques in synthesis and analysis of organic compounds. I was working with flash chromatography, inert techniques, work-up
Do you think this text is written correctly regarding my key courses?
During my bachelor program I took an advanced organic chemistry course, and I gained great experience on organic synthesis of ligands, and standard techniques in synthesis and analysis of organic compounds. I was working with flash chromatography, inert techniques, work-up
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Pretty good.
During my bachelor's program I took advanced organic chemistry and acquired experience in the organic synthesis of ligands and standard techniques in the synthesis and analysis of organic compounds. I was working with flash chromatography, inert techniques, work-up, HPLC, NMR, GC-MS, and UV-VIS to evaluate the results of the experiment. I also took advanced biochemistry, t
During my bachelor's program I took advanced organic chemistry and acquired experience in the organic synthesis of ligands and standard techniques in the synthesis and analysis of organic compounds. I was working with flash chromatography, inert techniques, work-up, HPLC, NMR, GC-MS, and UV-VIS to evaluate the results of the experiment. I also took advanced biochemistry, t
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