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Kouroshh Posted 12 years ago
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Is this part of my motivation letter written correctly

I am interested in the development of advanced ingredient for clinical and medical nutrition products. I would also like to provide appropriate sales materials to the customers. To reach this goal, I am passionate about the developing of the novel ingredient which requires implementing the creative ideas.
  

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Do you have a name or chemical structure for this advanced ingredient?

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Do you have a name or chemical structure for this advanced ingredient?
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Unfortunately, they did not mention any details about this ingredient name in their job description. The company is milk producer, so probably this ingredient should somehow be related to milk.
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Your paragraph reads like you are the inventor or developer of this compound.
Your goal is very unclear. Is your goal to be a good salesperson or company representative?
Is your goal to be a researcher and work in the laboratory?
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My goal is exactly both of the questions you mentioned in your previous comment. I should work both as a salesperson and researcher. This ingredient has already made but I need to develop the methods to increase the purity of this product without any impurities. Subsequently, I need to do some clinical trials.
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It is very unusual to work both as a researcher and salesperson. The compensation methods are very different: salaried versus commissioned.

I am interested in the your advanced ingredients with applications in medical and nutritional products. I would fit into several positions: as a company representative, educating customers and and distributing informati
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Thank you very much. I greatly appreciate your help.
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