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Kouroshh Posted 11 years ago
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Is this part of my email written correctly

I visited Barcelona one time. It is a very lovely city. Their sea foods are really great. There are the bunch of very good restaurants nearby the sea where they serve very good quality sea foods. You should also visit Park Güell. It really worth going there. One of the best tourist attractions in the Barcelona in my opinion. Also there is a very famous shopping street which is one your way to the sea side.

I hope you could enjoy very much your trip.
  

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By "this part", I assume you are only interested in correcting the one sentence; so I would change it to:
"I hope you really enjoy your trip." or "I very much hope that your trip is enjoyable."
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Dear Mr. Wilpeter,

Thank you very much for your feedback. Actually, I meant if you could correct the entire email not only the last part. It was my mistake. I would be greatly appreciate it if you could correct the whole text.

Thank you in advance.

Regards,
/Kourosh
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I visited Barcelona once. It is a very lovely city. Their seafood is really good. There are a number of very good restaurants near the sea, where they serve high quality seafood, You should also visit Park Guell. It is really worth the time (or effort) and is one of the best tourist attractions in the Barcelona in my op
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