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Kouroshh Posted 12 years ago
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Is this part of my cover letter written correctly

Through this project, I hope to develop advanced separation method which enables us to separate polar compound by using polar chromatography column. My goal is also to take advantage of this result in order to use it for many applications both in academia and industry.
  

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Hi, I would rewrite it as; In this project, I hope to develop A dvanced separation method will be developed which enables us to separate polar compound by using employing polar chromatography column. My goal is also to take advantage of The findings of the project will be utilized in many applications in both academia and industry.

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  • Hi, I would rewrite it as; In this project, I hope to develop A dvanced separation method will be developed which enables us to separate polar compound by using employing polar chromatography column.
  • My goal is also to take advantage of The findings of the project will be utilized in many applications in both academia and industry.
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Hi,

I would rewrite it as;
In this project, I hope to develop Advanced separation method will be developed which enables us to separate polar compound by usingemploying polar chromatograph
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