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Kouroshh Posted 12 years ago
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Is this part of my cover letter written correctly

Through this project, I am interested in the developing of bioprotective enzymes cocktail with the potential to be used in dairy industry. Subsequently, I am eager to solve the problem of the potential customers if they encounter any problem and giving them the best technical supporting service possible.
  

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Through this project, I hope to develop a bioprotective enzyme cocktail for the dairy industry . I am also eager to solve customers' problems and give them the best technical support possible.

  • Through this project, I hope to develop a bioprotective enzyme cocktail for the dairy industry .
  • I am also eager to solve customers' problems and give them the best technical support possible.
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Through this project, I hope to develop a bioprotective enzyme cocktail for the dairy industry. I am also eager to solve customers' problems and give them the best technical support possible.
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Thank you very much for your feedback. Can I also ask you what do you think about adding this part to my cover letter.

In addition, after each trial I would like to make a productive report covering how the novel enzyme solution performed and whether or not it worth using this method in industrial application and measure the efficiency of the new method
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kouroshhCan I also ask you what do you think about adding this part to my cover letter.
I wouldn't add it; it is presumed that such a report would be forthcoming.
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Dear Micawber,

Can I ask you kindly that if I want to add this part to my cover letter what do you think about the grammar? I was thinking that it is important for me to also add this part because in the job description they mentioned about this and I needed to write more than 2 lines in my cover letter.

This is the extra part which I edited again.

In addition, after e
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In addition, after each trial, I would like to measure the efficiency of the new method and report on the performance of the novel enzyme solution. This information can help determine whether this method is valuable for industrial application or requires further investigation.
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I greatly appreciate your help.

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