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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Is this pargaraph totaly corect

To day I had a customer who requested for the service of Western Union money transfer.However ,due to a transfer system failure,the customer could not get the service he looked for .And I have returned him back the money he paid ,1402.01 US dollars ,at his request.
  

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01 US dollars ,at his request. However ,due to a transfer system failure,the customer could not get the service he wished for. 01 US dollars at his request.

  • 01 US dollars ,at his request.
  • However ,due to a transfer system failure,the customer could not get the service he wished for.
  • 01 US dollars at his request.
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Hello anonymous, here you wrote:
AnonymousTo day I had a customer who requested for the service of Western Union money transfer.However ,due to a transfer system failure,the customer could not get the service he looked for .And I have returned him back the money he paid ,1402.01 US dollars ,at his request.

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