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MM_WDness Posted 19 years ago
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Is this parallelism?

01)An entrepreneur is someone who 01u00tests the maket02u00, 01u00creates some products02u00, and then 01u00makets it skillfully02u00.02br
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002)Many teenagers want their parents to give them the opportunity to have freedom and can become independent.02br
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00i still got some ques which confuse me. The underline part r the potion where it maybe wrong, but the whole sentance also may be corret.(this system is pissing me off @\_01i00____02i00/@). If there is any typo, plz ignore...02br
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003)01u00When02u00 the quater-finals of the Stanley Cup Playoffs 01u00are underway02u00, hockey fans 01u00can see02u00 at least one game 01u00nearly every night02u00.02br
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00 some of my freinds say the "nearly" is wrong, but it sounds alright to me...02br
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004)01u00Only a few of02u00 my friends say that they 01u00very enjoy02u00 living alone 01u00without any1 telling them02u00 what01u00 to do02u00.02br
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00 i think the wrong one is either the first or the 2nd.02br
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005)01u00The sport of02u00 sailing 01u00has changed02u00 very little 01u00from the time when02u00 only wealthy ppl 01u00could own one02u00.02br
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006)01u00I could02u00 tell01u00 that02u00 the dusty old car 01u00had come from02u00 Ontario 01u00by its licence plates.02u02br
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007)When i am 01u00at a meeting02u00, i try 01u00to be attentive02u00 and01u00 listen carefully02u00 to what the other ppl 01u00speak02u00.02br
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008) 01u00Tom moved to02u00 a different neighborhood 01u00cuz02u00 it was safe and friendly 01u00and it02u00 didnt 01u00cost much02u00 to rent.02br
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009)01u00Even they r02u00 too easy, I still 01u00enjor playing02u00 some 01u00of my old02u00 video games 01u00with my friends02u00.02br
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0010) If everyth 01u00turns out as02u00 planned,01u00 i hope to visit02u00 the Oakanagan Valley 01u00in02u00 the summer 01u00that lies ahead.02u02br
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00Some of the ques r quite tricky. careful reading, ppl.^^0-
  

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02br 02br 00I've corrected your sentences. 02br 02br 01font 00i still got some ques which confuse me. (this system is ******* me off 00<<< This is not a polite exprssion.

  • 02br 02br 00I've corrected your sentences.
  • 02br 02br 01font 00i still got some ques which confuse me.
  • (this system is ******* me off 00<<< This is not a polite exprssion.
  • Please don't use it on the Forum.
  • 00@\_01i 00____02i 00/@).
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0Hi,02br
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00The title of your thread mentions parallelism, but you don't seem to be asking about that.02br
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00I've corrected your sentences. 02br
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01font001)An entrepreneur is someone who 01u00tests the maket02u00, 01u00creates some products02u00, and t
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0thx 4 helping out02br
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00i will wacth my langauge from now on...0-

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