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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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0 At Marathon, we always believe in the customer's delight and to go a step ahead of the customer's expectations. We also believe in the simplest law of nature – what you sow today is what you reap tomorrow. We would like to share this news of an excellent investment opportunity, which will yield great returns with our family members first before it goes out in the market. 02 br
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0 It don't seem to be correct. Here is my take: 02 br 02 br 00 At Marathon, we always believe in the customer's delight and to go a step ahead 01 b 00 to mee 02 b 00 t customer's expectations. We also believe in the simplest law of nature – what you sow today is what you reap tomorrow.
- 0 It don't seem to be correct.
- Here is my take: 02 br 02 br 00 At Marathon, we always believe in the customer's delight and to go a step ahead 01 b 00 to mee 02 b 00 t customer's expectations.
- We also believe in the simplest law of nature – what you sow today is what you reap tomorrow.
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0 It don't seem to be correct. Here is my take: 02 br
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00 At Marathon, we always believe in the customer's delight and to go a step ahead 01 b 00 to mee 02 b 00 t customer's expectations. We also believe in the simplest law of nature – what you sow today is what you reap tomorrow. We would like to share this news of an excellent investment opportunity, which
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00 At Marathon, we always believe in the customer's delight and to go a step ahead 01 b 00 to mee 02 b 00 t customer's expectations. We also believe in the simplest law of nature – what you sow today is what you reap tomorrow. We would like to share this news of an excellent investment opportunity, which
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0 How about this line: 02 br
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00 At 00 , we always believe in 00 providing our customers with something that gives pleasure and exceeds expectation. 0-
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00 At 00 , we always believe in 00 providing our customers with something that gives pleasure and exceeds expectation. 0-
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0 01 span 00 At Marathon, we always believe in 00 providing our customers with something that gives 01 b 00 them 02 b 00 pleasure and exceeds 01 b 00 their 02 b 00 01 b 00 expectations 02 b 00 . 02 span 00 0-
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0 Thanks a lot but what about second part 02 br
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00 We would like to share this news of an excellent investment opportunity, which will yield great returns 01 b 00 , 02 b 00 with our family members first before it goes out in the market. 0-
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00 We would like to share this news of an excellent investment opportunity, which will yield great returns 01 b 00 , 02 b 00 with our family members first before it goes out in the market. 0-
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0 I think that the second part which you wrote later is right. 0-
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