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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing

Is this paragraphs grammar correct?

Dear ……

As our last conversation, however our company has just started for a short period, but we’re already growing with a fast speed on track, after one year preparation we already build up our company shape with a few projects on hand. We have a lot of different connection and we believe we will be one of the best within a short period. Please check attachment for our company proposal and planning for the coming few years.

If you have any question about the proposal please do not feel hesitate to contact me. Hope we would have a chance to work together in the future and hope to hear from you soon.

Best regards,


Thanks for the helping.
  

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I have assumed certain ideas and changed them accordingly. Dear …… As I mentioned in our last conversation, it has only been a short time since our company started. However we are already growing at a tremendous rate.

  • I have assumed certain ideas and changed them accordingly.
  • Dear …… As I mentioned in our last conversation, it has only been a short time since our company started.
  • However we are already growing at a tremendous rate.
  • After having prepared for a year's time we have brought up the company to a considerable height and it is poised to grow further with a few more projects on hand.
  • We have been successful in establishing remarkable level of business connections and we believe we will be one of the best within a short period.
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I have assumed certain ideas and changed them accordingly.

Dear ……

As I mentioned in our last conversation, it has only been a short time since our company started. However we are already growing at a tremendous rate. After having prepared for a year's time we have brought up the company to a considerable height a

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