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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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With the Impilturan company in general disarray and severely weakened due to the heavy casualties inflicted in the unexpected assault, they had no hope of defeating the enemy force and were swiftly routed by the cultists and their minions. Pursued through the Gray Forest by the Cult of the Dragon’s minions, the injured Taegan was saved by the faerie dragon Jivex, who used his illusion magic to throw off the avariel’s hunters. Taegan was healed by the elven spirits dwelling within the ancient gray trees of the forest, and he hoped still to be able to destroy the Cult’s operation by reassembling the scattered and fleeing remnants of the Impilturan army.
  

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