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Meanwhile, Tiago and his formidable force assaulted the dwarven complex beneath Kelvin’s Cairn in an attempt to find Drizzt. Tiago’s contingent managed to eventually defeat the dwarves after a brutal battle, but many of the dark elves, driders, and goblins were slain, including Jearth Xorlarrin, the weapons master of House Xorlarrin. Following the clash, Tiago and his band imprisoned the surviving dwarves, who informed them that Drizzt had left Icewind Dale a long time earlier.